I was traveling today so I’m sliding in under the wire here with my pantoum. There’s the form (which you’ll notice requires quatrains, and numerous repeating lines) and then we chose to use the words certainty and/or flight (or, in my case, fly).
I worked on two different poems this month and didn’t adore either one, but this is the one I’m most comfortable with.
So Much of Who You Are
So much of who you are is what you’re called
like a hermit crab becomes his empty shell.
Be it oddball, beauty, class clown, geek,
it’s certain and prescriptive as a mother cell.
Like a hermit crab, becoming his empty shell
or maybe more a puzzle, the chicken and the egg?
Is it certain and prescriptive as a mother cell
or do you name the name yourself, by who you are?
Maybe more a puzzle, the chicken and the egg:
First you breathe, then squawk, then try to fly.
You name the name yourself, by who you are
I’m here and true, myself, beloved til I die
First you breathe, then squawk, then try to fly
Whether oddball, beauty, class clown, geek
Say, I’m here and true, myself, beloved til I die
So much of who you are is what you’re called
All my poetry sisters wrote them too, and ya’ll, they are GOOD!!!
This is a weak way of doing this, but I’m just going to link to Kelly’s here and then you can follow HER links to everyone else’s. Is that ok?
Cheers, gang….
“First you breathe, then squawk, then try to fly.
You name the name yourself, by who you are
I’m here and true, myself, beloved til I die”
This sounds like something we should all whisper (or shout) to ourselves each and every day. *LOVE*
First, I must say how much I love your new site! (I know I said it on Facebook, but I’m saying it here officially.) It is gorgeous.
I really love this. Especially:
First you breathe, then squawk, then try to fly
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So much of who you are is what you’re called
I’ve been called many things, most of them true. I love that THAT truth is reflected in this poem.
Gorgeous new site! Now to catch up on the rest of your haiku…
I don’t know WHY you don’t really love your pantoums, because I sure do!