The Naani is a poetic form from India consisting of 4 short lines — no more than 20 to 25 syllables total — and very few other rules. (Which always sounds freeing, but isn’t.) We added a twist, because we’re fun that way, focusing on foresight, or fall, or both.
Foresight. These days. Ha! My response was to look to the natural world because nothing about the human world seems predictable at all anymore. There are messages for us in eggs and trees and maps, though, and we can read those…
An egg uncracked,
a mystery unsolved,
what waits for us tomorrow –
one sun or two?
Inside the tree
sits a clock, ticking off days,
seasons, shades of yellow,
predicting what comes next.
Topographic lines
read like fingerprints:
Go this way. This will be steep.
This will be beautiful.
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Enjoy these other poems, friends, and stay safe and well…
Laura
Sara
Tanita
Tricia
Kelly
Andi
Poetry Friday is at Teacher Dance this week!
OH! And would you like to join us next month? Our theme is hindsight and the goal is to pick one of your old poems to revise and/or write a new poem in conversation with it… Try it!
