Well, the poetry sisters have been back at our old tricks.
Throwing down dares and taking ’em up.
Dread and drudgery.
Self-flaggelation.
And, now, willingly sharing it all in public.
It’s as close as we come to reality TV, folks.
Some of you have been witness to our previous antics (see here and here), but if you’re new, it goes like this:
One of us gets a wild hare that has something to do with form poetry and a deadline.
The rest of us temporarily lose all sense of reason and say yes.
A few weeks (or months) later we all agree to post the results of the process.
Which brings us to today.
This time, it was the inestimable Ms. Kelly Fineman who suggested the form — The Roundeau.
And because it’s Kelly, it couldn’t just be the regular old run-of-the-mill Roundeau.
It had to be the Roundeau Redouble.
(There’s supposed to be an accent on that e and I can’t make my computer do that right now… sorry.)
Kelly does her typically brilliant job of explaining the form here, and it does help (even while calling it "somewhat twisted"). But I’m willing to admit that this is the hardest form I’ve ever tried to wrangle, and I’m afraid it wrangled me.
Along with the set parameters of the form, we also agreed that there’d be an overall theme of fresh starts or resolutions.
(We originally hoped to post around the New Year, then Chinese New Year and now, um, spring?)
But one of the wild things that happens when writing in form is that you have to give up some control over content.
You may start with a sort of plan and a whole lot of best intentions, but the form tells you what goes where and what can and cannot be said and before long, voila, a voice and narrative you didn’t know you had. There’s something liberating about it and, well, terrifying, too.
So, here’s mine (which I thought I’d lost to a nasty computer virus yesterday. Convenient, huh? But no.Thanks to Google docs, everything’s forever now. Oy.)
What’s old is new
All that’s old is new, the slate is clean;
this morning puts to bed the night before.
Sun spills nascent light through hash-marked screen
upon the clothes left hollow on the floor.
My grievances are gone, I don’t keep score.
Your chill thawed out in hours slept, unseen.
We’re through with silent treatments, slamming doors –
all that’s old is new, the slate is clean.
You pour my coffee, slip into routine.
We quietly agree to just ignore
the words we’d uttered merely to be mean.
This morning puts to bed the night before.
I want to ask if I’m whom you adore
still and true, as if we were sixteen –
you in my heart and me so sweet in yours,
sunshine pouring through the hash-marked screen.
But we’re not there, we’re somewhere in between
giving nothing and afraid to ask for more.
All we can drop are hints like seeds of green
upon the clothes left hollow on the floor.
If they send roots into our rocky core
and blossom like tomato, squash or bean,
we will be fine and flush again with stores.
If something less, or few? Still us, serene.
All that’s old is new.
— Liz Garton Scanlon, 3/2010
Now what I’d love for you to do is zip on over to my beloved Princesses’ palaces and check out their awesome efforts.
(We are flying without Tricia today and we miss her.)
Here’s Kelly’s…
And Andi’s…
And Laura’s…
And Tanita’s…
And Sara’s… (which includes a wicked true and funny tip sheet on the form).
I am, as always, in awe of what these women can do with a pen and a piece of paper, and feeling wild with luck that I get to play with them and call them my friends…
Thanks all, and happy Friday.
(Go check out the whole round-up today at TeachingBooks.Net.)

