Poetry Friday — Concrete Poetry

The school year is over here, which means sleeping in, swimming, and piles and piles of stuff.
The stuff that’s been in desks and backpacks all year.
The detritus of 4th and 6th grades.

The girls have unpacked broken binders, missing socks, and mighty fine report cards.
They’ve recycled rough drafts and thrown away broken pencils and protractors. 
And they’ve shared artwork and stories and poems — I could rent a storage unit there’s so much good stuff.
I mean, I’m biased. But seriously.

For example.
A concrete poem written by Small One:


Here are the words, in case you’re having a hard time making them out, due to the  Evil Eye and all:

Trouble

I seem to be in trouble
but I really don’t know why

I’m technically a great student — 
well, that is, when I try

I prefer my life to be carefree
and homework just doesn’t satisfy me

Another thing is going to school:
being on time is just not cool

Being right is incorrect
My science project, well, it’s wrecked

My teacher says I burst her bubble
I still don’t get why I’m in trouble

6 Responses to “Poetry Friday — Concrete Poetry”

  1. toby_speed

    Love that evil eye, Liz. And I completely agree about saving all the wondrous, creative stuff your kids do — I, myself, have trunks full!